Describing a Character

This term I have been learning to describe a character: 
Success Criteria: 

• use describing words 
• use language features e.g. similes and alliteration, 
• use my senses (see, hear, feel,) 
• hook the reader into feeling what the character was like

Little Red Riding Hood is a little girl.  She lives with her mum near a forest.  Her hair is long and dark.  She wears a red cloak over her head and shoulders.  She is nice, kind and helpful.  She loves flowers and took some to her Grandma in her basket.  

Reflection:  I could use some describing words.  It was a bit hard for me trying to write the words down.