- use interesting words
- use describing words
- use our senses (what we see, hear, feel etc)
- use a language feature like: onomatopoeia, simile
Reflection: I was amazed that I could write the words. I like to read my writing when Mrs T publishes it for me. I want to try hard to write the words and the sentences. Payton 22.11.17
1 comment:
Payton, this was a good try. I like the way you used your own ideas and the word Boom! described the sound. I liked the way your repeated the word Loud, - I really can hear how loud they must have been. Ka Pai!
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